2017考研英語翻譯技巧詳解(8):修飾減詞
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二、從修飾角度進(jìn)行減省
有些詞語在英語里是必不可少的,但在漢語中卻并非如此,如直譯成漢語則往往顯得累贅嚕嗦。為了使譯文簡(jiǎn)潔曉暢、"文約而意豐",這樣的詞語必須省去或是精簡(jiǎn)。例如:
(1) I felt a trifle shy at the thought of presenting myself to a total stranger with the announcement that I was going to sleep under his roof, eat his food and drink his whisky, till another boat came in to take me to the port for which I was bound.
我要去見一個(gè)素不相識(shí)的陌生人,向他宣布我得住在他家、吃他的、喝他的,一直等到下一班船到來,把我?guī)У轿乙サ母劭跒橹供ぉは氲竭@兒,我真有點(diǎn)不好意思了。(這里,如把 "sleep under his roof, eat his food and drink his whisky"直譯為"睡在他的屋頂下、吃他的食物、喝他的威士忌",會(huì)使語言極為繁冗,不夠精練。譯文采用減省譯法處理原文,既準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了原意,又使行文簡(jiǎn)潔,氣韻十足,一氣呵成。)
(2) Her dark eyes made little reflected stars. She was looking at him as she was always looking at him when he awakened.
她那雙烏黑的眼睛就像亮晶晶的星星在閃爍,他平素醒來的時(shí)候,她也是這樣望著他。(此句中有兩個(gè) "she was looking at him",如不作省略而譯為"她像平常那樣望著她一樣望著他",漢語就顯得嚕嗦繁復(fù),詰屈聱牙。)
(3) University applicants who had worked at a job would receive preference over those who had not.
報(bào)考大學(xué)的人,有工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)的優(yōu)先錄取。
(4)There was no snow, the leaves were gone from the trees, the grass was dead.
天未下雪,但葉落草枯。
(5) There was not a sound in her——and around us nothing moved, nothing lived, not a canoe on the water, not a bird in the air, not a cloud in the sky.
船上悄然無聲,四周一片靜謐,死一般沉寂,水面不見輕舟飄動(dòng),天空不見小鳥浮云。
(6) The problem of alternative fuels of vehicle is one problem we shall approach.
車輛的代用燃料是我們將要研究的一個(gè)問題。
(7) There are some things that I have happily seen of the wondrous way of the spider.
蜘蛛的奇異動(dòng)態(tài),我曾有幸目睹。
(譯文省去 "there are some things that"后,文字簡(jiǎn)約,表達(dá)生動(dòng),意思明確。)
(8) In actual fact, the United States is pursuing a policy of encouraging the aggressor…
實(shí)際上,美國在推行一種鼓勵(lì)侵略者的政策……
(9) He was smooth and agreeable.
他待人處事,八面玲瓏。
(10) Standing as it does on a high hill, the church commands a new view.
教堂建在高山上,向下眺望,風(fēng)景優(yōu)美。
(11) To learn is not an easy matter and to apply what one has learned is even harder.
學(xué)習(xí)不容易,使用更加不容易。
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