考研倒數(shù)9天：中國式陷阱--大作文語言錯誤_跨考網(wǎng)

　　北京新航道學校 李傳偉

　　第二十二天：中國式陷阱---大作文語言錯誤

　　語言方面是判卷關(guān)注的第二個方面。語言錯誤較多會扣分，而太多的話就會降低評分檔次。有些語言錯誤是閱卷老師比較關(guān)注的，考生必須盡力避免。事實上，考生只要細心，可以少犯乃至不犯這類錯誤。這些錯誤包括：

　　1.句子的主語和謂語不一致

　　2.時態(tài) 　

　　3.名詞的單復數(shù)

　　4.定冠詞和不定冠詞

　　5.搭配 　

　　6.單詞的拼寫

　　例一，

　　錯誤：More and more people believe smoking do harm to health, waste money. (主謂不一致)

　　正確：More and more people believe smoking does harm to health, and is a waste of money.

　　例二，

　　錯誤：If the law said that the man who destroy the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be less people to do that. (時態(tài))

　　正確：If the law says that the man who destroys the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be fewer offenders.

　　例三，

　　錯誤：So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinction. (名詞的單復數(shù))

　　正確：So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.

　　例四，

　　錯誤：For above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all problems it causes will be solved. (定冠詞)

　　正確：For the above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problems it causes will be solved.

　　例五，

　　錯誤：Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before. (搭配)

　　正確：Although the light is weak, it has a great effect which will make people more firm than before.

　　例六，

　　錯誤：We should take effective methods to deduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. (拼寫)

　　正確：We should take effective measures to reduce the number of fishing boats in the sea.

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