2014考研英語(yǔ)寫作160篇:充電(考生作文批改及評(píng)分)_跨考網(wǎng)

　　寫作原文

　　There is no doubt that the two cartoons vividly demonstrate a positive and ubiquitous scenario in modern society: increasing number of people go to miscellanelous(拼寫錯(cuò)誤，改為miscellaneous) training programs. A majority of people, with smile on faces, swarm into English classes and attend the lectures about WTO. What is conveyed(建議改為conveys) by the drawings is both inspiring and illuminating.What might account for this mushrooming phenomenon? Several points analyzed below may equip us with deeper comprehending of what we head for. First things first, the rapid development of economy has been accompanied with a corresponding of fierce competition. Therefore, many people prefer to attend some lectures about their careers, in the desire to(改為and want to,文中in the desire to表示“在欲望中建立”) keep abreast of the latest development of technology. In addition, the constant international communication stimulates people to endeavor themselves to learn something which is beyond their majors, thus subjecting the increasing challenges to their own minds(改為thus they may challenge themselves and broaden their knowledge). Last but not least, the desire for studying signifies the pursuit of individuality.From what has been mentioned above, we can safely conclude that if we are ever going to survive(加in) the harsh society, we must persist in learning new skills and knowledge. Only in this way can make us(改為we make ourselves to be) perfect candidates for a promising future.

　　總體點(diǎn)評(píng)

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