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　　2018考研在即，廣大考生們到了最后沖刺的關(guān)鍵期，對很多基礎(chǔ)不好的考生而言寫作就是最后的救命稻草，這兩天老師每天都會收到很多同學(xué)的習(xí)作。很多同學(xué)最關(guān)心的是他們的作文能得多少分，而比起分數(shù)，老師更想提醒你的就是能否減少一些低級的表達錯誤、邏輯錯誤、審題不清可能在這個階段是你要擺脫的影響你得高分的最大障礙。如果每個同學(xué)能在考場上花一點時間去自檢，改掉那些明顯的表達或邏輯錯誤，也許你就可以輕松獲得理想的寫作分數(shù)。本文以如下的一個題目為例，給大家舉一些老師看到的考生作文中的一些常見問題，旨在為大家梳理一下考研英語寫作中的常見問題，以幫助大家學(xué)會從以下的幾個方面去自檢，只通過提升表達準(zhǔn)確性的方式而不必去背太多復(fù)雜的模板句就可以助你多得2-3分。

　　Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

　　1) interpret the chart, and

　　2) give your comments.

　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET (15 points)

　　根據(jù)這個題目，要求考生按正式考試的時間來進行寫作，現(xiàn)將收集到的60份作文中出現(xiàn)的錯誤整理如下(標(biāo)紅色的地方為需要改正之處以及怎樣改正)：

　　1、整體情況：得分8-13分，大部分同學(xué)11-12分，個別考生寫了題目，應(yīng)去掉 The situation about study abroad

　　2、第一段的問題

　　(1)時態(tài)的問題

　　例：The chart shows great changes in the number of students who choose用過去式 to attend schools or universities outside their home country during the period from 2008 to 2011.

　　(2)單復(fù)數(shù)的問題

　　例1：To be more specific, the number of overseas students has skyrocketed by leaps and bounds by 36.5% from 110 thousands to 150 thousands over the period from 2008 to 2011.

　　例2：The above line chart shows changes in the numbers of students studying abroad during the period from 2008 to 2011.

　　(3)數(shù)據(jù)描述的問題(數(shù)據(jù)不準(zhǔn)確)

　　例1：According to the survey, the number of people studying overseas has been on a steady rise from one hundred and ten thousand people to one hundred and five thousand people.

　　例:2：Apparently, the number of people who study abroad surged substantially by 60%, from 100 thousand to 160 thousand.

　　例3：As can be subtly portrayed from the line chart,there are tremendous transformations have occurred in terms of the population 改成number of student who go abroad to study from 2008 to 2011 .

　　例4：The above curve chart explicitly reflects that 加a steady increase have During this period, the number of people studying overseas has been a steady rise from 10.8 thousand to 15.3 thousand.

　　(4)修飾關(guān)系的問題

　　例1：The chart above explicitly demonstrates the changes in the statistics of Chinese students加studying abroad.

　　例2：From the data given above, we can easily conclude that the 加number of overseas students experienced a gradual accumulation of nearly 40 thousand.

　　例3：From the statistic given in the chart, we can see that the number of 加students studying in foreign 加countries increased from about 11,000 to about 15,000.

　　(5)介詞的問題

　　...one can see that the ones’ number increased to 1.5 times from 2008 to 2011.

　　(6)內(nèi)容過于簡單，詞匯運用不準(zhǔn)確

　　例1：In the chart,the number of the student who study abroad is big 詞較簡單and it becomes more and more.

　　例2：The above line chart explicitly mirrors the statistics of the undergraduates 改成students study in abroad in China between 2008 to 2011.

　　一段是問題最多的，在此增加整段舉例及最終分數(shù)

　　(1)It can be seen from the line chart that the numbers of people studying overseas has climbed obviously ,increasing from about 110,000 in 2008 to nearly 150,000 in 2011. (描述部分太少，可再詳細一些，9分)

　　(2)There is a chart about the number of the people who are studied abroad. It is obvious that the population 改成number of the students 加studying overseas became more and more with the time加progressing . And I think it is a good situation for our country to educate the person with ability.(表述問題較多，影響交際，8分)

　　(3)縮進4字母The above line chart clearly reflects big changes have taken place in the number of people who go abroad to pursue further study during the past four years spanning from 2008 to 2011. Over the same period, the number of that increased steadily from 110 thousand to 150 thousand.(表述準(zhǔn)確，可加上對數(shù)據(jù)的再加工，比如做個減法)(12分)

　　3、第二段的問題

　　(1)用語不準(zhǔn)確

　　例1：It makes a person more independent because 加of live加ing alone.(because是連詞，可加of換成介詞短語，再在live后面加ing變成名詞)

　　例2：On the other hand, overseas studies also provides us with a valuable chance to to learn how to 加be open-minded and independent.(不定式短語要在to后加動詞原形)

　　例3：Those students will get high salary after 加they finish their academic career.

　　Study加ing abroad can help students to be fluent in a new language, familiarity with a different culture, and a chance to grow in different ways.(after在這里是連詞后面需要加完整句子，需補充主語;“海外學(xué)習(xí)”作主語應(yīng)是非謂語的形式;familiar在這里應(yīng)該和fluent保持一致)

　　例4：The world become integration改成ed(become系動詞后應(yīng)該是形容詞，而不是名詞)

　　例5：Meanwhile, it is改成they not only study aboard but also open up their eyes.(it 在句首要么做形式主語要么強調(diào)句，這里并沒有這樣的呼應(yīng)，不需要用it作主語)

　　例6：we could feeling the another culture in our world and it will widen our eyes. (情態(tài)動詞后要加動詞原形)

　　(2)雷同的模式化語言過多(在很多考生的文章中都可以看到這兩句話，句子本身沒有問題，但用的人過多，就會影響得分)

　　例1：A variety of complicated factors can account for the change, with the following two being the foremost.

　　例2：Nowadays, with the accelerating pace of market-oriented economy in China, folks in mounting numbers have possessed more disposable income, which enhances the purchasing power and enables them to afford the cost of oversea studying.

　　3、第三段的問題(問題最少，但有兩個嚴(yán)重問題：第一就是模板化語言痕跡最太重;第二是大家普遍不太重視三段的寫作，只留下一段模板句)

　　(1)用語不準(zhǔn)確

　　例1：this augment will be able to bring them more competitiveness at work.(be able to表示主語要有發(fā)出后面動作的能力才行，和argument用在一起不合適)

　　例2：with the continuous improvement of living stands and more individuals realize 改成 realizing the significance of spiritual pursuit ,this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.(with結(jié)構(gòu)是介詞短語，里面的動詞需用非謂語的形式)

　　例3：The above analysis naturally leads us to the reliable conclusion that individuals will benefit from the knowledge they studying 改成have learned abroad.(這里they...這個句子是修飾knowledge的定語從句，需要謂語動詞的形式)

　　(2)雷同的模板式寫法(很多同學(xué)在這個部分都只是把自己背過的模板句寫上就算收尾了，比如下面這兩個例子，在這里老師提醒大家要盡量加一點自己的觀點體現(xiàn)你最這個問題的思考，這樣才能有更好的分數(shù))

　　例1：From what we have discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that this current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, this trend will continue in our country for quiet a while in the near future.

　　例2：Considering all the points discussed above,we can naturally come to the conclusion that this trend demonstrated in the chart will probably sustain in the forthcoming future, which means the statistics of people studying abroad will continue its upward trend.

　　以上是老師根據(jù)出國留學(xué)這個話題收集到的一些同學(xué)寫的文章給大家舉的真實錯誤的例子，相信你也或多或少犯過其中的某項或某幾項錯誤，希望看到本文的考生們能從中看到自己的錯誤，及時規(guī)避，在寫作中有更完美的文章呈現(xiàn)!
 

（跨考英語教研室 包婷婷 轉(zhuǎn)載請注明出處）

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