歷年考研英語作文真題及范文（1994年）

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Section V Writing

Directions:

[A] Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS

[B] Time limit: 40 minutes

[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.”

[E] Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

OUTLINE:

1. The need for friends

2. True friendship

3. My principle in making friends

【審題解題】

這篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)是較為復(fù)雜的，包含了三個相對獨立的部分。第一段是寫人們需要朋友的原因——可從兩個方面來寫。第二段是寫什么是真正的友誼，可從三個方面來寫。第三段是寫自己在交友之中的原則，可從兩個方面來寫。

【核心詞匯】

as to 至于，關(guān)于

to get / form / build and maintain friendship 得到/形成/建立/建立和保持友誼

lasting / enduring friendship 持久的友誼

honest and conscientious friends 誠實和勤勞盡責(zé)的朋友

true / genuine friends 真正的朋友

tolerance and forgiveness 忍耐和寬容

【參考范文】 On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. Living in the society, only when a person has friends can he live a happy and colorful life. What’s more, in this modern society where communication becomes so important, one’s ability to form and maintain lasting friendship has been regarded as a necessity for a successful career.

As to what true friendship means, my opinion is as follows. First of all, true friendship originates from sincerity of both parts, and only sincere friends will give us a hand when we are in need of help. Second, no matter whether they are similar or different, genuine friends should be able to get along, share experiences and exchange ideas with each other. Last but by no means the least, since no one is perfect, we should learn tolerance and forgiveness, which are essential to an enduring friendship.

As far as I an concerned, my principle in making friends is that friends can be few but must be well chosen. In the first place, I would like to make friends with those who are honest and conscientious. In the second place, once the selection is made, I will trust him and offer him help whenever need arises.

【黃金模板】

As a human being, one can hardly do without… Living in the society, only when a person… what’s more…

As to what… means, my opinion is as follows. First of all… Second… Last but by no means the least…

As far as I am concerned, my principle/view… is that… In the first place, … In the second place, …

【結(jié)構(gòu)點評】

第一段和第三段都分兩個方面來寫。第一段的第一點沒有使用連接詞，這時第二點前的連接詞就要有所選擇，可能用what’s more, moreover, furthermore等等。第三段的兩點前都使用了連接詞，這是就應(yīng)與三點或三點以上的段落有所區(qū)分。大家看到，首段與末段在這里使用了不同的方法，顯得相得益彰。

第二段分三個方面來說，應(yīng)注意連接詞的配套使用——這里是從最重要的說到最不重要的，所以分別使用了first of all, second, last but by no means the least。

【妙筆生花】

第一段的第二句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，之后使用了only開頭的倒裝句，突出了朋友的重要性而后有形容詞平行的用法。第三句中的介詞短語作狀語非常值得學(xué)習(xí)，這里關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)的定語從句使其結(jié)構(gòu)簡單之中又富于變化，具有很強的表意功能。之后的form and maintain lasting friendship表示“建立和保持長久的友誼”，form亦可用get或build代替;be regarded as表示“被認(rèn)為是…”，此處動詞亦可用consider;其后的a necessity for a successful career非常精彩，請大家學(xué)習(xí)，其中a necessity比necessary 要好，請大家品味，萬里for a successful career意義凝凍。

第二段分三點說，每一點各有一句話。第一點中的originate from表示“源于”，而后有sincerity和sincere的連續(xù)使用;而后的give sb. a hand和in need of help分別表示“幫助某人”和“需要幫助”，意義恰合。第二點中的similar和different指的是兩種朋友——相似的和不同的，而后的genuine呼應(yīng)了上文的true，用來修飾friend或friendship;之后的動詞詞組的平行使用。第三點中先說“沒有人是完美的”，之后說我們應(yīng)學(xué)會容忍(tolerance)和寬恕(forgiveness)，而這對于持久的友誼是至關(guān)重要的(essential)，其中enduring等于上文的lasting。

第三段的首句是模仿Samuel Paterson名句：Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen。而后分兩點來說。第一點中使用了形容詞的平行，conscientious表示“按良心辦事的”。第二點中使用one the selection is made這樣的一個時間狀語從句，時間的錯落感就體現(xiàn)出來了，其后有個很好的時間狀語從句whenever need arises，表示“每當(dāng)有需要的時候。

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